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« on: April 25, 2010, 05:39:27 PM »



Alright, here is part of my first track using Logic Pro.  It is still unfinished.  Just looking for some feedback.  Smiley
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« Reply #1 on: April 26, 2010, 09:20:07 AM »

anyone get chance you give this a listen?
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« Reply #2 on: April 26, 2010, 10:04:04 AM »

well its pretty straight forward so far. You got a decent techy beat and some swooshy sounds until the bass comes in.

It's definitely pretty bare right now.

I would add:

some ambiance
a simple modulated melody to get some movement
some stereo panned sounds
maybe cut back on the drums and have them build up (ie, no clicky sounds or hi hats in the beginning, let them come in later)

other than that, the mix sounds fine, just need more meat and progression to the song. keep it up!
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« Reply #3 on: April 26, 2010, 11:10:13 AM »

well its pretty straight forward so far. You got a decent techy beat and some swooshy sounds until the bass comes in.

It's definitely pretty bare right now.

I would add:

some ambiance
a simple modulated melody to get some movement
some stereo panned sounds
maybe cut back on the drums and have them build up (ie, no clicky sounds or hi hats in the beginning, let them come in later)

other than that, the mix sounds fine, just need more meat and progression to the song. keep it up!


Hey thanks for the feedback.  I will work on adding these for sure.  I guess I was only focusing my time on the kick and percussion. 
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